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Fix weak scenes fast, with a proven 13-point checklist
Diagnose and improve any scene in minutes. Stop guessing. Follow the steps that have helped thousands of writers level up their pages.
What you will be able to do with this checklist
Spot missing Five Commandments Make sure your scene turns on a clear Inciting Incident, Turning Point, Crisis, Climax, and Resolution.
Check value shift, not vibes Confirm the scene starts one way and ends another, with a real shift that matters to the protagonist.
Force an honest dilemma Verify the Crisis asks a costly question with no safe option, so the choice reveals character.
Kill flab and filler Cut beats that do not move the story. Keep only what advances the goal, escalates stakes, or reveals change.
Align stakes with identity Tie outcomes to what the character values most, so even small actions land with weight.
Make doing nothing expensive Raise pressure so staying put costs more than acting, which drives momentum without gimmicks.
Writers are using this to level up fast
“In one afternoon I found exactly why three scenes were flat and fixed them. The checklist made it obvious.”
“I finally know what to look for when I revise. No more hand waving. The checklist keeps me honest.”
“This is the simplest way I have seen to make scenes work. It is concrete, practical, and fast.”
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